Abandoned Concepts: TwoTone - April 14th, 2009, 11:04 am
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[Posted by Shard on April 14th, 2009, 11:04 am]

And now, not just one, but TWO new additions to .:Sandbox:.! We have what you see here (Abandoned Concepts) and some things that will be popping up later (Possible Concepts). I figured I might as well show you the musings of my mind and get feedback on what was, could have been, or may happen. So, without further ado, the first Abandoned Concept you’ll be seeing here!

This comic is one that both started and ended during one of my hospital stays- TwoTone. The comic’s inspiration was, to be honest, me playing too much Final Fantasy. It gave me the idea of two ‘Chosen Heroes’ (which looking back was kind of silly) who had to save the world from some dark force. The beginning of the comic was Damaru and Rupph arguing over god knows what, then Rupph going into a dream (and meeting Damaru there) in the black background you see the poster on. They met the white cloak person, who was explaining why they were there… and that’s as far as I got. The comic ended due to lack of inspiration, and me having no idea whatsoever where the comic was going to go. Hell, I didn’t even know who the main villain was (so for the poster I just slapped some random sprite I had in there).

Thoughts?



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[Posted by Yamataro on April 14th, 2009, 11:08 am]

Well a Villian does help. Other wise it's going to fail. Lol. Maybe you can have kat's twin be the villian?
Anyway, save the world from? is the big question. From there, you build the story. Focus on one point you want or want to get to and from there build.



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[Posted by Neociz on April 14th, 2009, 2:49 pm]

I woulda liked to see where it was going, but w/e.
;-;



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[Posted by RiakenTh on April 14th, 2009, 3:33 pm]

test it, find possible problems, test it again, see what you can add in, then run it.



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[Posted by 10ace on April 14th, 2009, 4:03 pm]

... no idea what you said but nice comic/post/thing


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